Tuesday, October 19, 2010

SHE passed a perfect semi-circular smile and my heart ran away.
Listening to the gamut, drizzling drops on my head, walking down in the rain through the narrow lanes…I was stuck!
I turned my gaze to see someone who happened to just passed by my side during that ‘un-senseless’ un-tropical Vanessa of contemplation of my state of mind. The sensational articulation of my ingenuity and rationality at the same time introduced me with a newly born overt admirer of prodigy (Surprisingly who happened to be me, realized later). The Trance I was in abruptly vanished in heaven and in no time I figured out that I was alone!

(Had I said that word???)
 A L O N E???

Indeed I was alone. Something got ran away to a hypnotist’s magnetism, and I was left ALONE. I received a silent soliloquy speculation from the fascinating viewer beckoning on me.
Before I could figure out any change after a loss, she passed a smile. My Heartbeat followed the bullet for a while. For the moment I was numb, completely unconscious of my state of thought. My bullet-ridden mind found itself unable to recall what had happened a moment ago.
I looked into her eyes, the azure is feeling low. She raised the curls behind the ears and blushed, continuously decorating her face with that perfect breath pausing plethora of her smile. A train of pseudo-positive thoughts drenched my anti-conscious brain filled with multiple personalities of Me’s. Maybe the doors were open up for me or it was an illusion of fate. Or she wants me to accompany her, or I made her feel better, or…I am a stupid. Whatever it may be, one thing is clear, I was now completely a captive of hers. Fighting over a train of a million thoughts, something bizarre struck.
My Heart was now a lunatic, it was pumping up with an abnormal velocity, my senses came to confiscate, and the stomach was feeling heavy on the arrival of butterflies. I couldn’t recall or remembered the last time I felt the same, but I was pretty sure it was a feeling that I can’t take it, even I couldn’t bear it on my heart (Yeah you’ve read it right, I am feeling from my heart). The crazy mind stopped to respond to the stimulus and my transfixed gaze was unable to see anything but that GIRL.
My greedy hand reached the back pocket of my tank to reach a rose (I remembered it was a mother’s day and that rose was for my mother).
In the next 30 seconds:
I approached to the silent Cherub. She was still meditating the same posture; the best one of her personality. She also had her stare fixed on my approaching figure towards her. Before she could prognosticate what was going to happen in the next 30 seconds I released my hand from the back and forwarded her the rose.
‘A rose for a lady who took my heart away-‘before I could complete, she laughed and said ‘For me???’
I frowned ‘Yeah it is.’
Those 30 sec, how they passed even I couldn’t explain in words. (Let them be a secret for anonymity).
‘O so sweet of you.’ She blushed, smiled and again blushed and smiled…
She took the flower and passed with a last word ‘Love you! Take care’ again blushing…

I am missing the angel. I don’t even know her name; the only thing I recalled is her innocent face and that blush with a smile.
But the last words she spoke are still making me confuse. Really some girls are an ENIGMA and she was the most difficult one.

P.S.: Some events are actually inevitable, this event changed the way I looked the world and I became a different guy. My thinking, ideas indubitably transformed to a newer shape like never before, my way of experiencing the worldly surroundings became a bliss to me.

10 Lucks:

Jingle said...

interesting one.

RAHUL: The Weakest Point is Love said...

@Jingle Thanx...

Someone Is Special said...

Hi Rahul

Welcome to Rom for Romance.. a place to romance with your pen.. This is too romantic and I loved it.. I will consider this for Romantic Room of the week as well..

Watch out tomo for a new image to romance with your pen..

--Someone Is Special--

RAHUL: The Weakest Point is Love said...

@SIS... I am feeling myself on cloud #9. Thanx for your reward of appreciation. I am speechless!!!

Jingle said...


two awards for you,
invite you to join us at jingle poetry….

Someone Is Special said...


Check out this link, You are one of the Romantic Room of the Week..

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--Someone Is Special--

Liliana Negoi said...

wow...i realized at the end of it that i had forgotten to breathe...BEAUTIFUL!

RAHUL: The Weakest Point is Love said...

:)I am speechless.

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